Poetry Tips
Poetry Writing Suggestions
Here are some notes from last year’s
judges:
*Many students resort to 19th century models of poetry; it’s the 21st
century already! Poems don’t have to rhyme, and they don’t have
to be so “structured”.
* Good poetry incorporates: concrete language, complex imagery, and sensory
details. Don’t write poetry about “love” or “hate”
or “sadness”; this is a HUGE poetry faux pas! What is it about love
or sadness you’re trying to convey? Find an everyday occurrence or object
that can become a metaphor for what you’re trying to express, and use
concrete – not abstract – language to express the idea.
* Try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary into your poems. Poetry is
a compressed form of creative writing and an opportunity to expand one’s
understanding and use of language.
* People often use poetry as “therapy” (i.e., letting their feelings
erupt on the page). Many people, then, jump into writing poetry without having
actually read any poems. Ask yourself: would you write a novel without reading
novels? Try to read some poems before writing your own (see the links page for
some poetry web links).
* What makes a good “technical” poem? Many persons submitted technical
poems that we weren’t quite sure what they were talking about (some even
included a paragraph of exposition before the poem even began). Please be aware
that many technical subjects are not common knowledge. Try to convey the basic
idea of the technical topic you’re talking about within the poem (e.g.,
a programming language). But don’t get too enthralled (or big-headed)
about describing the technical topic (no one likes an arrogant academic with
an inflated sense of self-importance about what they work with). This will help
the judges, as well as passersby, fully appreciate the poem. Also remember that
technical language can be used creatively. Have fun!
Here are some additional poetry writing
tips:
Courtesy of John Hewitt at PoeWar.Com:
* A poem with “Love”, “Destiny”, or “Hate”
in the title already has two strikes against it
* Don’t explain everything
* People will remember an image long after they’ve forgotten why it was
there
* If you write a bad poem, at least you wrote
* There are many excuses not to write; try using writing as an excuse not to
do other things
For more poetry tips, visit: http://www.poewar.com/archives/2004/10/24/poetry-writing-tips/
Courtesy of Lisa Cote:
* Narrow your focus
* Write around your theme
* Express ideas, not emotions
* Ditch the rhymes
* Edit your poems
For more poetry tips, visit: http://www.webcom.com/wordings/artofwrite/poetrytips.html
Some Suggestions on Form (if you’re stuck) Example: Wetlands Haiku LIMERICKS Please visit Michigan State University’s engineering
poetry web site for information and examples of blank verse and free verse poetry
(http://www.egr.msu.edu/~gunn/poetry.htm).
Note: you do not have to have a structured style for your poems
HAIKU
A Haiku is a short, three line poem from the oriental tradition. It is meant
to be contemplative and in general usually deals with nature, the seasons, or
meditative reflections as a topic. There are 17 syllables in a Haiku, with 5
syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third.
Nitrogen cycle
Cleansing purification
A swamp is heaven
By: Julie Graf, Masters Student in Natural Resources
* There are five lines in a limerick
* The rhyme scheme is a a b b a
* Lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme
* Lines 3 and 4 rhyme
* While the number of syllables per line may vary, generally a limerick follows
this structure:
* Line 1: 8 syllables
* Line 2: 8 syllables
* Line 3: 5 syllables
* Line 4: 5 syllables
* Line 5: 8 syllables
* Limericks are part of a grand humor tradition; have fun!
Example: Engineering Limerick
There once was a major from hell
That gave kids anxiety spells
Nights in the lab
Spent with topics quite drab
Were endured for a chance to excel